The Watched Short Film

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Thanks!

Review Feedback

We have shown our draft Review to a number of people, and made an evaluation of this review, from here it has allowed us to make a few changes to our review, to make it appear more realistic.

• We Removed the second page, as the review appeared more like a poster.
• We closed up the gaps between the text.
• We changed the fonts on the review, as the main title of the review used the title for the film (the logo), which would not be used in a film review.
• The review text itself was inported, as before it was just the Quark "Jabber" to show where the text would be.
• Added star ratings.

Poster Feedback

After looking at our poster we have concluded some key areas we need to change for our poster to look more real, and help project the image of the film we are wanting the audience to decode.

The things we need to change are:

• Font change; as the current font is seen as looking slightly comical, so it will help if we give the title a more gritty, edgy font to create a serious feel to the film.
• Give larger gaps between the title, as our title doesn't leave much space around itself.
• Change the film company logo's, as we currently have corporations such as paramount and new line cinema, which wouldn't be producing a short film.
• Correct the production text as it is slightly unsymmetrical and uneven.